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07 February 2013 @ 11:56 pm
Commitment [Chapter 5/12 Part 3]  
Title: Commitment Chapter 5/12 Part 3
Author: [info]mysteriousgal11
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: TaDaiki
Genre: Fluff
Summary: Arioka Daiki has been Takaki Yuya's secretary for almost a year. He prides to his self on keeping their relationship purely professional until a business trip to Hawaii proves to be for his undoing. The heat of the sun strokes the flames of passion, and Daiki can't resist his boss. But one night they got a shocking news, Arioka Daiki, a male, got pregnant.

Chapter 1, Chapter 2, Chapter 3, Chapter 4 Part 1, Part 2, Part 3, Chapter 5 Part 1, Part 2

Chapter 5

Part 3

When Daiki woke up the next morning, he was still locked in his time bomb happiness. He had learned so much from Takaki. He had never imagined that their love making will be more hotter. His blood ran hot at the memoru. What must Takaki have thought?


Daiki suddenly realized that Takaki’s eyes were open and he watching him.

“”Are you all right?”

“I-I f-feel…” Embarrassed was what he wanted to say, but the word wouldn’t come. How could he have behaved like this? What happened to him?

Takaki finished the sentence for him, as he had on previous occasions when he’d been stuck for words.

“Like a real person? As though you’ve been on a voyage of discovery and found what you’ve been missing all years?”

“I feel…different” Daiki confessed, his voice nothing more that a whisper.

Takaki smiled. “In a good way, I hope. You’re magnificent.”

Magnificent! Oh, wow! Arioka Daiki, magnificent! They were words Daiki had never expected to hear.

“And I don’t know about you, Daiki, but I’m hungry.”

Hungry? How could Takaki think of food at a time like this?

“I’m going to jump in the shower. Care to join me?” And before Daiki could respond, “Perhaps not. Or we’ll never get any breakfast.”

Takaki left the room without waiting for Daiki’s answer and Daiki pulled the sheets over his head.  He had only to think of Takaki’s hands on him, stroking and teasing, the latter’s mouth nibbling and tasting, to feel swift arousal between his thighs and an almost insatiable urge to run after him.

It was crazy, it was totally insane, but he couldn’t help himself, and he was still lying in the same position when Takaki returned. Takaki pulled the sheet aside and stood looking down at him.

“What are you doing, curled up under there?”

Takaki looked magnificent, and completely naked. Daiki’s eyes refused to move away from the muscled hardness of Takaki’s chest and the amazing 6 pack abs. He narrowed down his looks and looked at the hips of his boss and… When Daiki realized where his eyes were going, he sat up with a stifled curse.

“I was waiting to use the bathroom.” And before he could give himself away, he fled to the bathroom.

By the time Daiki returned, Takaki was dressed in a white polo shirt and dark chinos, but his eyes were hungry as he looked at Daiki wearing one of his cotton robes, tightly belted around his waist. Daiki half expected Takaki to make love to him again, but he didn’t.

“I took the liberty of ordering few clothes for you,” Takaki said instead. “I hope you don’t mind, but I guessed you hadn’t bought enough with you for a few extra days. Take a look in the wardrobe.”

Daiki’s mouth fell open when he saw different gorgeous and pricey clothes, everything he could possibly need stored there.

“You’ve bought these for me?”


“I don’t know what to say.” Daiki was totally overwhelmed.

“You don’t have to say anything Daiki.” All Takaki wanted was to keep him here for as long as possible. Daiki had turned into the most amazing lover. Ever since he had seen Daiki’s transformation, the latter tortured his soul, but he had feared after last night that Daiki might accuse him of simply bringing him here with the sole intention of seducing him.

But, no, Daiki had been willing. At every opportunity Takaki had given daiki the option to call a halt but the latter hadn’t. Considering that Daiki had never been with someone before, Daiki responded to him with a passion that was both amazing and surprising, also definitely exciting. Daiki had even pleasured him in a way that could only come from instincts.

Two days with Daiki would never be enough. Takaki didn’t want full commitment that was not he was after. Not after what his ex-wife had done to him. As far as he concerned there was no way of telling whether all person were the same, so it was far better not to let his heart get involved.

Besides, Daiki would never bind himself to any man. He too had been badly hurt. But there was no reason why they couldn’t indulge in an affair, maybe even a long term one. Daiki had shown that he was capable of enjoying intimate pleasures. Oh, yes, Daiki had shown him in a very big way. A surprising big way! He knows he had unleashed a tiger into Daiki.

“I’ll see you downstairs,” Takaki said quietly. “Otherwise I might be tempted to make love to you again.”

Daiki felt color flood his cheeks, especially when he saw the raw need in Takaki’s eyes, which at one time would have scared him to death. Now it simply ignored.

Once Takaki had gone, he dressed swiftly in a lilac cotton top and white pants, both of which fitted him perfectly. He wondered if Takaki knows his size already. He brushed his hair and left it loose, and then hurried downstairs.

“You look cute,” were Takaki’s first words. “That color matches your eyes. Did you know they are so sparkling right now? Especially when we’re making love.” Takaki added with a knowing smile/

A swift tremor ran through Daiki. He had no idea that his eyes were so expressive.

“And you should always wear your hair like that. The curly one doesn’t fit you.” Takaki threaded his fingers through it and pulled Daiki’s face close.

“It suits you. You’re very gorgeous person sweetie.”

With his heart racing, Daiki fearlessly met Takaki’s eyes. It was amazing how braver he felt now, so much more sure of himself. And even though his mind told him that he needed to be careful, his body took not the least bit of notice.

He had become a real person, with all the needs and desires. No longer repressed, no longer hating the world. Takaki treated him with respect, care and gentleness.

His eyes grew moist because he had never allowed any other person into his life, he had never had the opportunity to judge for himself whether they were different. He had not even wanted to find out. He had judged himself of little value. Wasn’t that what his father had told him, time and time again?

But now, Daiki knew differently. Takaki would never have crossed the dividing line between business and pleasure if he had not found him attractive. And Takaki would never have forced himself on him. After his initial paranoia he felt himself perfectly safe in Takaki’s presence. He was not plain and worthless after all. He was gorgeous and desirable. Takaki had told him so.

“Daiki you are crying. Why?”

“I’m not,” Takaki protested quickly. “My eyes are watering, that’s all.”

Takaki smoothed a gentle thumb over Daiki’s eyelids and then dropped a kiss on each one in turn. Takaki didn’t let Daiki go. He kissed Daiki on the lips instead, and all the fire and emotion that had burned so brightly last night came rushing back.

A/N: The shortest part in this chappie. The next part contained smut J Quite heavy one~ hee hee. It’s longggg~ I finished the draft already @_@ Almost 3k words.

Gonna post all the part of Chapter 2 for longing for you tomorrow!! J Supposed to be today, but got lazy XDD

Fics dump tomorrow also. I still need to type it but the drafts are already finished!

Sequel for “Top”, smut fic also and a oneshot for DaiChii&YamaChii J

And andddd~ I’M SO HAPPY TODAYYYYYY~ I received a text from LBC that I can already refund my moneyyyy TT3TT Been waiting for that for almost more than a month!! That’s a lot of money I swear!! >___< My parents got mad at me, as in super mad, because it’s more than Php. 30,000 -____- They almost killed me LOL. But I’m so happy noooowwwww~ <3 That’s why fics dump tomorrow to share my happiness~ YAYYYYY~ <3 <3 <3 Okaneeeeeee~ *U* 

Current Mood: giddygiddy
alois_trancyalois_trancy on February 7th, 2013 05:01 pm (UTC)
first!!! will proper comment later <3
alois_trancyalois_trancy on February 7th, 2013 05:03 pm (UTC)
this is beautifuulll.....

and i really wait for next chap <3
luv ur work
Fhaymysteriousgal11 on February 7th, 2013 05:05 pm (UTC)
Wow~ Thank you~
though I think this is a boring part~

Next part will be naughtier LOL

Thank you for reading and commenting~
alois_trancyalois_trancy on February 8th, 2013 06:13 am (UTC)
noooo this is faaaaar from boring...
this is sweet and romantic..
you picture tadaiki so welll and good !! :D love it

i love you most *hug u*

ur well
Fhaymysteriousgal11 on February 12th, 2013 04:15 pm (UTC)
Yeyyy~ I'm happy it's not boring :)

Oww~ I love you too~
OkajimaLovekusumi_koharu on February 7th, 2013 06:14 pm (UTC)
Aww, Daiki is soooooo cute!

Can't wait for the next chpt ;D
Fhaymysteriousgal11 on February 7th, 2013 06:17 pm (UTC)
He is ne~

Thank you for reading and commenting~ ^U^~
玲 Rei: 13hwangtinglee on February 8th, 2013 04:22 am (UTC)

TaDaiki's relationship is developing yo
Ganbatte XDD
Fhaymysteriousgal11 on February 8th, 2013 09:02 am (UTC)
Waittttt~ XDD

Of courseee~ or else me will force them together XDD
玲 Rei: 13hwangtinglee on February 8th, 2013 02:41 pm (UTC)

Fhaymysteriousgal11 on February 12th, 2013 04:16 pm (UTC)
You waited for too long ne~ >n< I already ypdate it~

Ehhhhh~ he's fat O3O
玲 Rei: 13hwangtinglee on February 12th, 2013 06:06 pm (UTC)

Fhaymysteriousgal11 on February 12th, 2013 06:23 pm (UTC)
I'm sick that's whyyy~ I always got sick O3O
Hahaha~ what are those proper things? XDD

Ohhh~ the sexy one *U* Sureee~
玲 Rei: 13hwangtinglee on February 12th, 2013 09:51 pm (UTC)
Ahhh I thought of that
Hope you are getting better ne
Oh proper stalking thing is to be able to view your LJ on my pages hahaha
Something you have done for my LJ
So you can properly stalk me hahaha

Yup yup the oh so handsome Yuyan
I wish I can read your fics soon
Few more hours hahaha
amira_mia5amira_mia5 on February 8th, 2013 08:10 am (UTC)
can't wait for the next part! otsukare~
Fhaymysteriousgal11 on February 8th, 2013 09:02 am (UTC)
Thank you for reading and commenting ^U^ ~
brnytbrnyt on February 8th, 2013 08:57 am (UTC)
SMUT IS COMING ~ fuffufuufufufuf *perveted mind =)))
Fhaymysteriousgal11 on February 8th, 2013 09:01 am (UTC)
Yesss~ smut is coming XDD

Thank you for reading and commenting ^U^ ~
yuuki_momoiroyuuki_momoiro on February 8th, 2013 06:41 pm (UTC)
next chapter please....
Fhaymysteriousgal11 on February 12th, 2013 04:16 pm (UTC)
Posted it already~

Thank you for reading and commenting ^U^~

Edited at 2013-02-12 04:17 pm (UTC)
にこ: harububblegumpockkypenguin on February 9th, 2013 03:39 am (UTC)
Daiki is soooooooo lucky omg Takaki is so nice to him ;w; I love Daiki's sparkling eyes too! Hehehe.

Otsukareeeee! Smut next part eh~ fufufu~ -w-
Fhaymysteriousgal11 on February 12th, 2013 04:17 pm (UTC)
Yes so luckyyyy~ envy LOL Me too~

Thank you for reading and commenting ^U^~
reira_ariokareira_arioka on February 11th, 2013 06:35 pm (UTC)
It's short... >3<
but still love the stories^^

I want more TaDaiki raburabu moment...
i mean the MOST raburabu one...

can't wait for the next chappie XD

thanks for the fic ne^^
Fhaymysteriousgal11 on February 12th, 2013 04:19 pm (UTC)

I will do my best~

Posted it already

Thank you for reading and commenting ^U^~