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02 February 2013 @ 09:58 pm
Commitment [Chapter 4/12 Part 3]  
Title: Commitment Chapter 4/12 Part 3
Author: [info]mysteriousgal11
Rating: NC-17 for this chapter
Pairing: TaDaiki
Genre: Fluff
Summary: Arioka Daiki has been Takaki Yuya's secretary for almost a year. He prides to his self on keeping their relationship purely professional until a business trip to Hawaii proves to be for his undoing. The heat of the sun strokes the flames of passion, and Daiki can't resist his boss. But one night they got a shocking news, Arioka Daiki, a male, got pregnant.

Chapter 1, Chapter 2, Chapter 3, Chapter 4 Part 1, Chapter 4 Part 2

Chapter 4

Part 3

Cautiously, Daiki risked looking at Takaki and his breath caught in his throat when he saw the desire in the latter’s eyes. If any person had looked at him in the past like that, he would have run a mile, but he knew without a doubt that Takaki would never pressure him into anything that he was not ready for. The fact was this was much of a surprise to him as it would be to the latter because he actually wanted Takaki to make love to him.

He closed his eyes again, allowing the moment to seep into his mind, into his bones, into his heart, feeling something aching in the lower region of his stomach. If Takaki ended the kiss now he would feel sad. He would have had a taste of heaven snatched away from him quickly if the latter pull out.

It seems like his hands got their own mind because they snaked around Takaki, trapping him, his body urging itself against the latter’s body. It shocked and excite him at the same time, never in his wildest dreams had he ever think that he’ll be in a situation like this.

The wild beats of Takaki’s heart beating against his own told him without words that excitement ran through the latter’s veins too, and that he was also deeply affected by what’s happening to them.

“Why?” Daiki asked himself, when for nearly a year he had worked hard for this man without feeling anything, was this happening now? No, that was wrong. He had been aware of him; how could any person not be? But his fears were such that he allowed his thoughts to think that his boss’s a devil.

Based on pure instinct now, Daiki ground his hips against Takaki, he was shocked by the latter’s hardness, but actually he’s happy in the fact that he was able to do this to someone. To Takaki Yuya. Not any person, never just a person. Would the latter allow him to set the pace?

Takaki trailed his fingers down to the clothes of Daiki, unbuttoning them. He then let his fingers touched the throat of the younger guy, feeling the pulse he found there before moving lower to feel the chest of Daiki, he flicked the latter’s nipples then made a circular motion in it. Daiki suddenly tensed, his eyes fluttered open.

Takaki was watching him, surveying his reaction, but he saw behind the assurance of the latter the hunger that matched his own, the lust that they’re craving for each other.

Their kiss followed by a deeper one, heart stopping kisses that sent Daiki spinning into a world she didn’t recognize, a world where senses were paramount. In these last few minutes he had become a complete person, a person filled with emotions he had often wondered about but never expected to experience. He felt as though he had been born again and he wanted this moment to go on forever.

It was disappointing when Takaki lifted his head, when his hands fell to his sides. Daiki first thought was that he had let him down, and he felt tears soon to drop in his eyes until Takaki suggested that they make themselves more comfortable.

Which must be why they ended up in bed! Daiki thought.

Daiki could only vaguely remember Takaki lifting him into his arms and carrying him to the latter’s bedroom. For some reason his mind had gone numb. He had been aware of nothing except the feelings moving round and round inside him, feelings that needed both love and passion.

It all started when Takaki kissed him, except that the kiss was more than just a kiss. It was a full scale attack on his defenses. It stripped away barriers, leaving him open and vulnerable and bursting with excitement. If this was what making love was all about, then he was glad that he had not gone through his whole life without ever knowing what he was missing.

Their kisses became more intense, hungrier, more everything, in fact not only did Takaki kissed Daiki’s mouth, and he sucked and nibbled it, creating passion that both shocked and thrilled Daiki. Takaki trailed kisses down to Daiki’s neck, causing Daiki to tilt his head and somehow Takaki managed to remove the latter’s clothes at the same time.

When Daiki heard Takaki breathing hard, he didn’t know what the matter, until he felt the latter’s fingers touched a certain place on his back, then he knew.

“How did you get this scar?” Takaki asked, his voice unusually quiet.

Daiki struggled with the truth, but decided that he needed to be honest.

‘’It’s from the buckle on my father’s belt. He didn’t mean to hurt me that badly.” Not that Daiki’s father ever said that, or even apologized. His father is drunk that time.

“Whether he meant it or not, it should never have happened,” growled Takaki. “Did he beat your mother as well?”

Daiki nodded.

Takaki cursed.

“It’s a good job he’s no longer alive or I would have great difficulty in keeping my hands off him. Only coward hit their family. Did you never report him, Daiki?”

“I was too afraid,” the younger guy confessed. “He was very big man. He’d probably have killed me.”

Takaki cursed again under his breath and cradled Daiki in his arms. He held him for a long time, until he felt them both relax again, until he was able to push to the back of his mind everything that was bad and evil.

“You’re so brave.” Takaki told Daiki over and over again. “Brave and wonderful.” He kept stroking the younger guy’s skin and when Daiki shifted his hips up to his, he groaned and kissed him, and his heart leapt when the latter took his hand and put it on his chest.

Daiki closed his eyes and gave himself up to the moment. Takaki’s touch caused him to be aroused. The older guy began teasing him, pinching his nipples and playing with it. His nipple responsed to the latter’s touch, hardening as if it’s craving for more. This experience was something he would remember for the rest of his life, even if it would never happened again.

But when Takaki suddenly leaned down to kissed his nipples sucking and nipping them with his fine white teeth, all his bones melted. The older guy is savoring his nipples as if his life is dependent on it.

“You’re all right with this?” Takaki’s voice was hoarse and his eyes rose into Daiki’s, there’s only pure lust in their emotions. This is the first time he lost control and it’s all because of Daiki. How could that be? How could be kissing the latter do this to him? Daiki was inexperienced he didn’t know what was expected to him and he wasn’t his ideal type…


Daiki looked at him, unaware that his eyes were huge and shiny, his cheeks were flushed and he already looked as though he had been well and truly made love to.

“Do you want me to stop?”

The younger guy shakes his head from side to side, not trusting himself to speak. How could he when both his body and mind felt as though they no longer belonged to him? Somehow it seemed like Takaki had cast his spell over him and he’s now his to do with as he liked. He had gone from being a person who was afraid of people to someone whose body was filled with a desperate need to be touched.

Needing no further encouragement, Takaki trailed kissed across Daiki’s nipples to his navel. All Daiki had to do was lie there and enjoy.

“Ahhhh~ Hnnnnn~ G-gooddd…” Daiki couldn’t keep still. He wriggled and squirmed and was completely unaware of the sounds he made.

“Ahhaaahhhh~ Y-Yuyaaa...hnnnnaahhhh..AHHHAAAH~” Daiki sighed and cried, even screamed tiny screams of pain, yet it wasn’t pain at all.

Takaki was enjoying making him aware of his body, his sensitive parts that when Takaki gave a lightest touch of fingers or tongue, could make him scream and moaned. It was almost an act or cruelty, delicious, and mind blowing cruelty.

But none of it, nothing prepared Daiki for the moment when Takaki explored one of his intimate part. Takaki separated his legs and carefully eyed the price that’s waiting for him to touch. It’s so raw and already standing. The older guy grinned at the masterpiece he did. He went closer to Daiki and leaned down to put Daiki’s cock in his mouth. He can’t describe how perfect Daiki’s taste, he loves this addicting “milk” that the younger guy is producing.

“Y-Yuyaaa~ Hnnn…Too m-muchhh~ I-I can’t take it ahhhh anymoreee ahhh~” Daiki moaned when Takaki deep throated him. He looked down and saw his boss lapping his milk and playing with his cock. He can’t believe that the latter can be this hot and seducing and because of this, his fingernails dug into Takaki’s shoulder, his body lifting from the bed and then he releases in Takaki’s mouth. He was shocked and immediately sat down.

“G-Gomen, I d-didn’t..” Daiki didn’t continue his words when he saw Takaki swallowed his milk. “Y-yuya! D-don’t do that, it’s dirty!” Daiki said while blushing.

“My sweet Daiki, it’s not. You’re delicious and you made me crave for more. I love it.” Takaki smiled at him and kissed him. Their tongues entwined and Takaki’s letting Daiki to taste his own essence. Daiki can taste his own milk and he blushed more knowing that his boss drunk it. Takaki pulled away from the kiss and pecked Daiki’s nose.

“Make love to me Takaki,” Daiki said hoarsely, almost without knowing that he spoke. “I want you to make love to me.”

“Are you sure?” Takaki’s voice was as hoarse as Daiki’s.

Daiki nodded in response.

Takaki then removed his upper suit, letting Daiki to see his upper body, the body that Daiki love so much to see. The older guy unbuckled his belt, removing it together with his pants and what followed is his boxer brief.

It’s a magnificent sight to Daiki, that large and huge manliness of Takaki is a breath taking thing.

“Y-Yuya?” Daiki called Takaki’s attention.

“Yes sweetie?”

“C-can that f-fit inside me?”

Takaki chuckled at Daiki’s question. “Don’t worry sweetie it will.”

He spread Daiki’s legs more and lowered himself over him, when he began to enter the younger guy, the latter couldn’t breathe and produced tears in his eyes. That sight made Takaki stopped. He cursed softly.

Was he doing wrong something wrong? He wasn’t experienced like Takaki’s other lovers, was that it? Should he do something? Helping him? All that that’s run into Daiki’s head when Takaki stopped. He had no idea why the older guy did that.


“You’re a virgin.” The words choked from Takaki’s throat. He never did a virgin before.

“I thought you knew that.”

“What I mean is that I can’t do this to you. I’ve never made love to a virgin before. It would be wrong to...”

Daiki puts his finger on Takaki’s lips. “You’re not doing anything I don’t want. I’m a guy Yuya, virgin or not it’s not important. Please Yuya, please don’t leave me like this I want it as much as you do.” And Daiki wrapped his legs tightly around Takaki, grinding himself against the older guy.

“S-shit…” Takaki groaned again and after only a moment’s of further hesitation plunged himself complete inside Daiki.

“AHHHHHHHHH~” Daiki shouted the moment he felt the pain, Takaki is huge and because the latter entered without any preparation, it hurt him so much. He let his tears to fall down and Takaki wiped it.

“Shhh..it will be all right..” Takaki is comforted the younger guy. He’s not moving and letting Daiki rest for a bit. When Daiki opened his eyes and nodded to him, he smiled and moved slowly. It’s took Takaki’s self control not to move fast but for the sake of Daiki, he will.

“Hnnn~ Ahhh…Y-Yuyaaa, F-faster…” Daiki knows that Takaki’s just waiting and controlling himself. He doesn’t want the latter to get bored so he asked Takaki to move faster even if he’s crying too much because of the pain.

Takaki is trying his best to look for Daiki’s spot and when he did, he was awarded by a precious moan from the younger guy.

“AHAHHHH~ Y-Yuyaaaa~ O-onegaiiii..hnnn..f-faster..d-deeperrr..ahahhhh~” Daiki moaned as he felt the intense mind-blowing pleasure when Takaki hit something inside him.

The older guy puts the legs of Daiki on his shoulder so he could move deeper. He angled his thrust making sure to hit Daiki’s spot continuously. He felt Daiki clenched him and he loves that feeling.


“Ohhhh, da-damnnnn~ The..reeee~”


“D-deeper Yuyaa..O-onegaiii~”


Daiki heard himself calling Takaki’s name over and over again. The pleasure was so intense. He hold his cock and begun pumping it putting a show for Takaki.

Takaki continue moving, getting bigger inside Daiki because of the sight the younger one is doing. He abused the nipples of the younger guy as he licked and bite it.

The younger guy is clawing Takaki’s back and messing with his hair.

“Ohhh..D-Daiki..I gonna..hnn..” Takaki whispered on Daiki’s ear.


And seconds later their world exploded.

A/N: Soooooooooo~ how was the last part of this chapter? I tried my best for this. >.< A mild smut because Daiki ish innocenttttt~ Don’t worry this is not the only smut part in this fic.

P.S. This is not the cause why Daiki got pregnant.


Current Mood: stressedstressed
gloriaArigloriaari on February 2nd, 2013 02:38 pm (UTC)
gloriaArigloriaari on February 2nd, 2013 02:39 pm (UTC)
though I am still up to part one cause of my exam:(
Fhaymysteriousgal11 on February 2nd, 2013 02:52 pm (UTC)
Daijoubuuu~ This spot is yours ^U^ ~
Hannahharuka_yamachii on February 2nd, 2013 03:10 pm (UTC)
It's more smut to come..*whack my head
Owh my innocent mind..
Spot! Spot! Spot!
Can't wait for next chap..
Fhaymysteriousgal11 on February 2nd, 2013 03:16 pm (UTC)
Yeshhh~ Takaki tainting Daiki's innocence XDD

I'll post it tomorrow~

Thank you for reading and commenting ^U^~
(no subject) - haruka_yamachii on February 2nd, 2013 03:20 pm (UTC) (Expand)
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(no subject) - haruka_yamachii on February 3rd, 2013 03:58 am (UTC) (Expand)
yuri_ichigofruits_lover on February 2nd, 2013 03:36 pm (UTC)
Spot first~~
I'll read later...
Fhaymysteriousgal11 on February 2nd, 2013 03:38 pm (UTC)
Haiii~ ^U^~
(no subject) - fruits_lover on February 2nd, 2013 04:19 pm (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - mysteriousgal11 on February 2nd, 2013 04:22 pm (UTC) (Expand)
alois_trancyalois_trancy on February 2nd, 2013 03:59 pm (UTC)
why is noot? T___T
Fhaymysteriousgal11 on February 2nd, 2013 04:09 pm (UTC)
What do you mean by why not?~ O3O
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yuuki_momoiroyuuki_momoiro on February 2nd, 2013 04:00 pm (UTC)
gosh!!! so intense...
Fhaymysteriousgal11 on February 2nd, 2013 04:09 pm (UTC)
It is? Ureshii~

Thank you for reading and commenting~
OkajimaLovekusumi_koharu on February 2nd, 2013 04:18 pm (UTC)
That was hot, and cute (⌒▽⌒)☆ lol
I think i've said this already, but I really love how sweet Yuya is to Daiki.

Fhaymysteriousgal11 on February 2nd, 2013 04:23 pm (UTC)
Yayyyyy~ I'm happy you like itttttt~ >u<
Because Takaki cherished Daiki ne~

Thank you for reading and commenting~
(no subject) - kusumi_koharu on February 2nd, 2013 05:44 pm (UTC) (Expand)
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brnytbrnyt on February 2nd, 2013 05:07 pm (UTC)
*clap clap clap * applause

motto author-san motto!! :))))
Fhaymysteriousgal11 on February 3rd, 2013 12:09 am (UTC)
Hahahaha, doesn't sound right~ XDD

Thank you for reading ad commenting~
玲 Rei: 13hwangtinglee on February 2nd, 2013 08:00 pm (UTC)
Innocently little pengi
Oh my if this doesn't get Dai-chan preggy
That means Yuya gets to enjoy his Daiki again hahaha
Fhaymysteriousgal11 on February 3rd, 2013 12:10 am (UTC)
Yeshhhh~ his innocenceeee~ TT3TT

*nods* Hahahahaha~

Staining the pureness of Daikiiii~

Thank you for reading and commenting~
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にこ: daikipeacepockkypenguin on February 5th, 2013 02:22 am (UTC)
OMG /massive nosebleed/ *AAAAAAA*
Daiki's so cute asdfghjkl when he asked can that fit in him omg hahahaha XD
And Takaki called him sweetie aaaaaaah <3 ;w;
Still not pregnant from this? (¬w¬) how many more sexytimes eh fufufu~
Fhaymysteriousgal11 on February 5th, 2013 02:26 am (UTC)
Too much blood everywhere~ O3O *wipes*
He's an innocent penguuu~
More sexy timeee~

Thank you for reading and commenting~